i so love this! this- is such a beautiful story. I can so feel the romantic atmosphere, yet you keep the characters to themselves: Ashe is how she should be! And all the tiny references to the game. I adore this kind of stuff. Your story is the kind in which one has to immerse themselves in. Then once caught, its really quite exciting. Well - of course, it helps mostly because I get all weak-kneed over Ashe Basch bits ^^
Ah the Uncle Halim carrying the little princess. Tis so sweet, and I remembered how fondly he said that in the game, how he once knew a child he carried in his arms. -squeals and flails happily - XD
I know most believe that her royal highness would never resort to any of suggested men: Basch being 'Gabranth - the king slayer? - how much would the people forgive? If ever, they had forgiven the Archadian Judge? And not only that, the people of Archadia as well. ohh but your writing skills would definitely make a believer out of me. Ok, enough of my rambling. Hurry with the next!
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Date: 2007-08-29 12:12 pm (UTC)Ah the Uncle Halim carrying the little princess. Tis so sweet, and I remembered how fondly he said that in the game, how he once knew a child he carried in his arms. -squeals and flails happily - XD
I know most believe that her royal highness would never resort to any of suggested men: Basch being 'Gabranth - the king slayer? - how much would the people forgive? If ever, they had forgiven the Archadian Judge? And not only that, the people of Archadia as well. ohh but your writing skills would definitely make a believer out of me. Ok, enough of my rambling. Hurry with the next!