Definitely. I hear what you're saying above. Absolute agreement with you. Noah being difficult is a more challenging, more colourful canvas to paint on, embellish on, than say something that is mundane and such an easy relationship.
What I love about Ashe/Basch is just that: their difficulties of their situations. It has always been thus, from the time Rasler died, to the time of his imprisonment, to Ashe's hiding from her country and people. Their difficulties are so profound and interesting to come together. She's forgiven him, yes, but I bet he struggles with what he has to do: to keep his dying brother's wish, and a country (Dalmasca) he loves, and a Queen he loves. Yes, love.
But, in Basch's life, all of his sufferings have led him away from those he has loved: his mother, his brother, and now this. That's why it's quite interesting and so noble of his character. He is truly the embodiment of unselfishness in many ways. I love that! At the same time, because of this, he can be easily picked on by the harbingers of strife. And he still can walk away innocent in the end. He has these flaws that can make his loved ones angry, and one in which I want Ashe to hit him over the head lovingly.
I'm quite amazed at your plot so far. It's good!
Ok, let me go over with some parts for you:
Where they make love, Pen being a virgin and Gabranth being blind - it's good that its not this overwhelming fantastic experience at first. And maybe, because Noah isn't used to being blind yet, ^^ he's a fumbling idiot. Although, honestly, even with the limited amount of sexual experiences Noah may have encountered, he's still pretty damn good at it.
As for the -wow- surprised bit of news on Pen's parents. That would really put the shocker into the already difficult relationship. -whew- you sure know how to insert conflict indeed.
I can see where Pen would go to find understanding - to Vaan, her best friend and childhood playmate. Perhaps also - asking Basch as well. As for their last night in which they share love, it is very possible. Especially since they have strong feelings for each other. Are both physically and mentally, emotionally attracted, and viola'! you have two people who want to share a physical relationship. And the background where the sound of rain and thunder highlighting the event just makes it all sweeter. That's what you're asking right? ^^
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What I love about Ashe/Basch is just that: their difficulties of their situations. It has always been thus, from the time Rasler died, to the time of his imprisonment, to Ashe's hiding from her country and people. Their difficulties are so profound and interesting to come together. She's forgiven him, yes, but I bet he struggles with what he has to do: to keep his dying brother's wish, and a country (Dalmasca) he loves, and a Queen he loves. Yes, love.
But, in Basch's life, all of his sufferings have led him away from those he has loved: his mother, his brother, and now this. That's why it's quite interesting and so noble of his character. He is truly the embodiment of unselfishness in many ways. I love that! At the same time, because of this, he can be easily picked on by the harbingers of strife. And he still can walk away innocent in the end. He has these flaws that can make his loved ones angry, and one in which I want Ashe to hit him over the head lovingly.
I'm quite amazed at your plot so far. It's good!
Ok, let me go over with some parts for you:
Where they make love, Pen being a virgin and Gabranth being blind - it's good that its not this overwhelming fantastic experience at first. And maybe, because Noah isn't used to being blind yet, ^^ he's a fumbling idiot. Although, honestly, even with the limited amount of sexual experiences Noah may have encountered, he's still pretty damn good at it.
As for the -wow- surprised bit of news on Pen's parents. That would really put the shocker into the already difficult relationship. -whew- you sure know how to insert conflict indeed.
I can see where Pen would go to find understanding - to Vaan, her best friend and childhood playmate. Perhaps also - asking Basch as well. As for their last night in which they share love, it is very possible. Especially since they have strong feelings for each other. Are both physically and mentally, emotionally attracted, and viola'! you have two people who want to share a physical relationship. And the background where the sound of rain and thunder highlighting the event just makes it all sweeter. That's what you're asking right? ^^